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	<title>Comments on: Martha Alderson aka The Plot Whisperer on Blog Tour&#8211;to be featured on Coach Teresa&#8217;s blog Oct. 18, 2011</title>
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	<description>Story Consultant Teresa Jade LeYung on Wellness, Themes, Archetypes -  Love Made Of Heart ®</description>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 23:42:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Deborah &amp; Don,
Because my 2 posts (about Martha/Plot Whisperer being on my blog) were next to each other . . . I see now that you awesome writers posted your comments/questions on this post instead of this one http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/ where Martha did answer questions from about 20 writers. 

Martha answered Deborah&#039;s question (even though Deborah&#039;s comment wasn&#039;t showing up on the latest blog post) because I had re-posted Deborah&#039;s question when I saw it in my email notification. Don, I couldn&#039;t figure out where your question was even though I saw it in my blog administrator panel. Talk about sleuthing :) !

I&#039;m moving your questions to http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/ because Martha will be back tomorrow. Right now she&#039;s getting ready to be escorted to Capitola Book Cafe by her entourage for her 7:30pm appearance.

Thank you, Deborah &amp; Don, for giving me a mystery to solve!
Sincerely,
Coach Teresa LeYung-Ryan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Deborah &#038; Don,<br />
Because my 2 posts (about Martha/Plot Whisperer being on my blog) were next to each other . . . I see now that you awesome writers posted your comments/questions on this post instead of this one <a href="http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/" rel="nofollow">http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/</a> where Martha did answer questions from about 20 writers. </p>
<p>Martha answered Deborah&#8217;s question (even though Deborah&#8217;s comment wasn&#8217;t showing up on the latest blog post) because I had re-posted Deborah&#8217;s question when I saw it in my email notification. Don, I couldn&#8217;t figure out where your question was even though I saw it in my blog administrator panel. Talk about sleuthing <img src='http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  !</p>
<p>I&#8217;m moving your questions to <a href="http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/" rel="nofollow">http://lovemadeofheart.com/blog/writers-invited-to-camp-out-here-the-plot-whisperer-martha-alderson-to-arrive-october-18-2011-on-blog-tour/</a> because Martha will be back tomorrow. Right now she&#8217;s getting ready to be escorted to Capitola Book Cafe by her entourage for her 7:30pm appearance.</p>
<p>Thank you, Deborah &#038; Don, for giving me a mystery to solve!<br />
Sincerely,<br />
Coach Teresa LeYung-Ryan</p>
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		<title>By: Don Hudson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Don Hudson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 20:32:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HI Martha,

In my first novel in a series of two, i wanted to know what you thought of having a character&#039;s sister die on 9-11 that sets up the inner conflict for a character&#039;s ongoing conflict with his family?

is that cliche? Will New York editors shy away from that? Or has the 10th anniversary lightened that heaviness?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HI Martha,</p>
<p>In my first novel in a series of two, i wanted to know what you thought of having a character&#8217;s sister die on 9-11 that sets up the inner conflict for a character&#8217;s ongoing conflict with his family?</p>
<p>is that cliche? Will New York editors shy away from that? Or has the 10th anniversary lightened that heaviness?</p>
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		<title>By: Deborah Taylor-French</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deborah Taylor-French</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 17:53:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In my second book in my Dog Leader Mysteries for middle grader kids, I&#039;m adding three new villains, two other supportive characters and a rescued dog. I&#039;m worried about my readers tracking over ten characters, especially a few with subplots. 

Any hints for tracking subplots and character tags to help myself and my readers? I want to keep my story fun for 9 to 12 year old fans. 

And yes, I have your book.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In my second book in my Dog Leader Mysteries for middle grader kids, I&#8217;m adding three new villains, two other supportive characters and a rescued dog. I&#8217;m worried about my readers tracking over ten characters, especially a few with subplots. </p>
<p>Any hints for tracking subplots and character tags to help myself and my readers? I want to keep my story fun for 9 to 12 year old fans. </p>
<p>And yes, I have your book.</p>
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